Extract C- is about how being a doctor is hard work and it's really busy.
Extract D- is about a nurse who acres a lot about her patients but the patients never seem to be in a good mood as she tries very hard.
Extract E- is about a women talking about a doctor and being angry because she doesn't get enough time and attention from his as he gives to his patients.
Extract F- is about a person talking about how the doctors become really busy but she is relieved when she sees no one sitting on the chair.
Extract G- is about a receptionist talking about a phone call she had about a patient wanting a home visit from the doctor.
I think extract A " I should of been a doctor" is he most effective opening because it gets straight to the point. I would keep some of the paragraphs like extract F because it describes the feeling of a person who works at a doctors.
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